Sunday, 20 March 2016

Writing 7MS

These are some of my highlights in my story

Brian yet again figured out that someone needed to penetrate the gas tank, They decided that they would use a sultana sniper to pinpoint the accuracy. Mother Tulloch volunteered to shoot, as she was a farmer, so probably the best shot of the group! She aimed at the tank; fired, and missed! But it definitely got their attention, so the copter faced Mother Tulloch, who happened to be the one holding a smoking sultana sniper (awkward).

At the dead of night we sneak out of the little lane and advance on toward Mr Trump’s house… this is when the group realise they are being followed. So they play it off and wait until they turn around the corner, stayed there and waited until the pursuiter came around the corner, and jumped out and pulled out their  banana guns and told the figure to freeze, the, rather small thing kept a steady pace. As it wheeled into the light, the army realised that it was a cherry bomb!

Charlie said “worry guys, it's just a cherry bomb on a rocket propelled seat”, but Mother Wright noticed something strange about that cherry,it seemed… shiny? Then it hit her...She screamed “ ITS ARTIFICIAL”!!! Everybody runs a good 15 metres, but Mother Coco couldn’t make it far enough, and lay on the ground for a few minutes. Everyone was silent… and then, all of a sudden, she stood up and started taking random spazzes and punching people, and the brains of the group, Brian, realised that whatever the victim gets hit by, or just touches they join sides with!


Lewis Paton - Tapsell

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